Alyana Agda :
- The form is good, maybe make it wider.
- About the area maybe need to scope out a new site
Marcus Lee:
I like the integration of the seating and play area. It is simple but effective. It strengthens the idea of children supervision by parents while they play. Maybe make the edges nice and soft to make it look more inviting and playful.
Tutors Feedback
Tom:
- Search more about the material and the manufacturing process
- Rounded edges
Simon:
- The slide looks plain compared to the other slide.
- Just put one colour
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